Soldier's Story: Final Chapter reviews
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Loved it!! You should write vampire fiction please, your so talented!
That was so Beautiful! Thank you for writing such an amazing story!
The best story iv read in so long so happy Mark and Adrian got back together. Would love to know what happens next but u did say the end but any way thank you so much for such a great read i love love loved it :D
Thanks for this great series...keep writing, mate!!!
I love all of your story! I kinda surprise that david will pick andrew as his boyfriend,and adrian will come back with mark. This story is so touching. Keep up a great stories! :D
Love dis story and all the others u have inspired me 2 look 4 my mark love a happy ending
Great story David but i just wish it didn't end like that with Cory. He's a nice guy and he was gud 2 adrian, he had nothing but love 4 him, He didn't deserve that. I love Mark with so much passion but he's no angel, i just wanna wipe that smile he had on his face when he came in the door with a fist. i just hope Cory and George find love and move on with their lives lol. Anyway, i'm Luking 4ward 2 more of ur stories. Love u Dave XOXOXO
#We still wont mind if you continued with it..
Thanks for writing such a great story..
i loved it i had been waiting for this a lot of time, and i love thinking of who the characters may be...and i always relate mark with spencer reed
loved ur series i cried during all of them, continue writing David
quite an amazing story, and beautifull
quite an amazing story, and beautifull
Best story I have read in the longest time ever! Most emotion, love, and sex! And it made me cry at the end of every chapter!
Best story ive read on this site. Its a real story that actually has filling not just a quickie.
And I feel so so sorry for George and Corey. May be they found each other? :)
Please do keep writing. This was insanely good!
Wow, this is one of the most unexpected and surprising story I have ever read.
Just finished reading the whole story. While reading the first parts of the ending, I was heart broken knowing that Mark and Adrian wont be together ( I freaking CRIED!! ) But as i continue reading it my hopes got higher and higher until Marks birthday party. In that moment I was freaking out more and more as i read the rest. I had a very huge smile on m y face when Mark was on the door when Adrian was packing. It was a breath taking ending :) Your such a great writer. Keep Up the good Work. I mean Great Work ^_^
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart.
I look forward to whatever story you finish soon :)
All I can say is that my life is complete. I imagined such a great story and ended with a desire to find my Marine!
Wow...I'm really moved by this story...I know its a fiction but it seems so real. Too bad Cory acted the way he did...I really wanted Adrian and Cory to work out but I also wanted Adrian and Mark to work out...as long as George and Cory does not work out. Maybe write another chapter? Where can we talk to you? Where does your inspiration come from? You're really talented!!!
David, plsssssssss. Make a continuation of this, their marriage, their married life, if they adopted a son or daughter. Plsssssssssss!!!!!! I want more for mark and Adrian. Continue football love too. Tnx!!!!!!! YOU'RE DEFINITELY THE BEST AUTHOR. BETTER THAN J.K. ROWLING and STEPHENIE MEYER!!!!!!! REALLLYYYY!!!!!!!
WORST STORY EV3R !!!
o.m.g itz d best i hv read so far. Kudos
o.m.g itz d best i hv read so far. Kudos
I love your stories please right more, and you should make a book o something.....
A very well done, i have read all of your chapters, it had made me get all emotional. I felt i was in that story over viewing there actions the characters Such a good start all the way to the ending. Its very detailed and very understanding, with lots of action involved. My best bits was when Adrian was trying to save Jake's life, he was trying really hard but was very difficult, and knew that Adrian was gay and told adrian to go to mark. Also the impact of Adrian saving so many lives for the soldiers in Iraq i admire, so much respect from the entire camp. The main star i'd have to say would be Adrian, mark, then jennifer and alan who all played a very strong role.
If any more stories are yet to follow, or even what happens next in this story, or even better a producer should make a gay romance interest film out of this, ( of course he would have to ask for your permission of course lol).
However again a very well done and keep up the great work! all the best Tony Williams from London, England
This was a Great Story. I loved it! Was so glad and relieved when Mark and Adrian got back together. Awesome story, I stayed glued to it the whole time. Thanks for sharing.
i super love this story.... wish i find someone who truely love me too.... BIGGEST THUMS UP!!!!
ive read this story many times already and i must say i wanna read about what happened after, like the wedding. i no this hole story like the back of my hand, its so good
The is the most beautiful story i have ever read.I love the fact that how you have managed to keep your readers asking for more. You have managed to capture the story line as well as the emotions that one goes through...love hate betrayal, specially the fight and the love making. But i am not happy with the ending....their is some thing missing? I do hope to see more stories, from you.
wish you'd reliz a book.
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.
at 1st i thought adrian and alan davis were gonna end up together LOL*Mybad*
i looooove this story....!!!
I just finished reading it again and i felt just as excited as the first time i did!! A really great story, i love the way you write and how you keep the reader interested! I fell for mark since the first episode and cant take him off my mind. It was really great but it would be just perfect if you wrote a next chapter or chapters, about their life together. I identified myself with adrian and fell for mark almost as quickly as he did, and im kind of infatuated jajaja. I would tell you not to give up on this story it is really great, in fact i havent found any other story like this on i i just dont want it to be over!! So just please think about it.... And i qould also like to be in tou h with you, please email me at ... PLEASE! And thanks
After reading this, seriously I'm feeling sooo lonely. I also need my man!!!! :(
I loved everything about your story. It was very well written and kept my interest throughout!Now I am going hookup someone here bit. ly/ivanovoivanovo.ru to do the same!
Reading through this story I had moments of smiling and moments where I was on the brink of tears. I am glad that Adrian and Mark get married, but sad that Cory wasn’t able to find his love. This is the first of your stories I have read. Looking forward to reading your others. Please keep writing!!! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, this one!!!
Hiya David, first I just want to say wow just wow. Your soldier story pulled on my heart strings and I cried tears a few times and had a lump in my throat when I did. It was so touching and heartfelt and a beautiful story. I also read the story story you wrote and that one was amazing as well. I love to write myself and I'm working on a gay love story with a bartender/business owner named Ethan and a Marine named Ryan and a couple other Marine's so when I read your soldier story I thought about mine at times and what I can do to make it better. The way you write with the emotion you do is something I try to do as well. I would love to share it with you sometime to see what you think. I'm nowhere near done, just started a week ago and already have like 18k words so it's a lot to write in a short time but it just comes to me when I write. I can't wait to read your other stories because the two so far do not disappoint at all! Thank you for sharing.