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Soldiers Story: Chapter 5 reviews


Posted by John Smith (email: bryc)
No! You can not end the story like that its so unfair to the readers! Haha. Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter!
Posted by Michael (email: )
I hope it turns out good! Like CORY from the ALPHA team shot Mohammed instead Mohammed shot Adrian.. I kinda believe that's going to happen.
Posted by Nick (email: Oneo)
David you are killing us with this ending! :) but I love this story one of the best I think. I love how your stories are not just sex but love passion emotion and action. Keep up with fantastic work. Please post next one soon!! I hope Adrian didn't die because this story is way too good and has so much potential to end now. Great job man!!
Posted by Charles (email: char)
Omg, Your Story is amazing ! i read it at least 6 times from the 1st to the 5th chapter, please make an ending . your an excellent writer & i hope that you've become succesful . i love thios story so much :)
Posted by Allen (email: alle)
Adrian, Mark, Jennifer, and Alan better not die!! Very good series!! Keep them comming!
Posted by taurus (email: steg)
mohammed is adrian's friend, he loves him, that's why he gave him those films 2 watch....so i hope he does'nt kill him. Damn I Love this story.....that cocky soldier Cory sounds interesting, can't wait to read more about him and Chapter 6 better cum out soon.
Posted by kay cee (email: ceci)
you always make leave us in suspense. Great story! Cnt wait to see what happens next..
Posted by Chris (email: Chri)
Your stories are captivating. You're a great writer. You're the best on this site, the very best. Never stop. I'm waiting for the continuation, hope it would be soon.
Posted by Annissa (email: HEDo)
All of ur stories make cry.

I was a tough cookie but now i am a big softie.

I love how your stories are more emotional than full of sex.

Keep it going.
Posted by Annissa (email: HEDo)
All of ur stories make cry.

I was a tough cookie but now i am a big softie.

I love how your stories are more emotional than full of sex.

Keep it going.
Posted by smithy (email: smit)
OMG! please post the next one soon, this story is Great!
Posted by Sean (email: juic)
This story is truly amazing. I love it, I can not wait to read the next one!
Posted by luis (email: just)
i am with nick this story is amazing for all what happens, tragedy, love, its all part of what a really good story needs!!
Posted by Nick (email: Oneo)
When is the next one David?! We are all waiting on your amazing stories. You've got us all addicted
Posted by David Bula (email: Ad_l)
Hey sorry guys been busy this week but I am half way done chapter 6 so I should summit it by today or tommorrow.
Thanks for the comments guys you are the best : )
Posted by yolo mcquiness efron (email: agis)
*CRYING* :'(
Posted by EmilyFoster (email: Emil)
My god, you can spin a sexy story. I would love to chat and get to know you and explore what else is in your sexy mind. My profile here bit. ly/agaysex
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