Soldier's Story: Chapter 3 reviews
Review(s) 12 | Read story
This is beautiful I swear! Please don't let it end.. This is my favorite series so far and also the When I'm With You by Kieran Lee.. You and Kieran are my two favorite authors! LIKE! SWEAR!!
OMG! so i have read all the chapters so far, and i absolutly love this! it's one of those mixed emotions, sexy, and action filled love storys! i love it! love it! love it! please continue writting this. i know it's alot to type but you have lots of followers on this story and i speak for all of us when i say please do not stop writing this, publishing this! (: haha thanks ;)
OMG! I hope Alan doesn't die! PLEASE! This is too much! :(
i'm with u on that one Andy.......Alan must'nt die, he's a great guy. i've never read anything like this FUUUUUUCCK....i'm hooked.
oh my god this is great i hadnt read anything like this, i absolutely love it the way someone cares about you... dude you must continue writing this
Excellent! Please continue with many more chapters. Your writing draws the reader in wanting more. Do not stop now. You have the style of writing the reader wants to visualize and feel all the different emotions. Well Done!
keep writing, mate!!!
u r very good writer.... great job!
Thanks you guys are the best and chapter 4 should be available for you to read soon
Good site to find some juicy more descriptive words :) Always check the definition as well! ;) Good luck! Hope to be reading more soon! Feel free to reply :D -Official fan- Lol.
This is amazing! I've read all three so far and hoping for more! May i suggest when writing further Don't exhaust the words "Says" & "Said" Use more descriptive words for dialog, Like exclaimed, Bellowed, Objected, affirmed, announced,Declared, responded, Answered.
Bula! Standing ovation, we're screaming and throwing flowers. Strong, straightfromtheheart writing. Publish on paper, mistooks and all, exactly as is. My eyes are wet, so are my jeans. Bravo! Encore!
Omg I love dis story Mark just takes my heart away keep doin wat you doin my dude I'll love 2 read more of yur stuff
Beautiful and erotic story. Very well done. Now I will go here and try to repeat the above bit. ly/agaysex